SUSTAINABLE CAMPUS (peer review)
Due: 10/21 (bring 2 printed copies)
- What parts of the essay do you find most convincing and why?
- What parts are still unclear or feel incomplete?
- Identify and rephrase the central claim of the paper.
- Does it say something not obvious and significant about the "artifact"?
- List and comment on the major points and evidence used to support the central claim.
- How and when have potential counter-arguments been addressed? Suggest some of your own.
- Indicate sentences or paragraphs that seem out of order, or in need of revision.